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Pretty god damn awesome! I didn't think there was a way to combine king of the hill and pokemon together but you manage to do it perfectly. Voice acting was pretty good as well.

It's a bit short. As a suggestion you could have the carrot walking around the street after hear the bad news from his father to get the sense of whats happening to the carrot and how his life was turned upside down.

Anyway this isn't too bad. Really good choice of song. Keep up the good work.

morcov responds:

Thanks for the suggestion. I was sort of on the fence about the abruptness of the ending too.

Think it would be more funny without the annoying laughter in the background. Other then that it was pretty decent.

I think you need to do a bit more with this. It was very short.

KBMstudios responds:

Yeah, it was just a quick joke I thought of one time. It's my first animation and I was really just trying to learn the ins and outs of flash. You're right though, it's definitely too short.

Not bad but it's a bit long. But I think you need to improve on lip syncing a bit. The movement on the characters lips wasn't entirely convincing.

The animation was pretty cool but I think you need to add in some more jokes. It's not anything particularly too new if that makes sense.

SokkoTM responds:

Typically agreeable. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Not too bad. It reminds me of South Park lol.

I'd suppose it is a decent attempt since this is your very first animation piece. But carry on animating as it will improve your animating skills. Also practice your voice acting a bit more.

Jestnasty responds:

Thanks! I'll keep this in mind. I like your guitar animation, by the way.

I can see that you have put some effort in this. But the story itself isn't really anything too new. And maybe you should add more jokes in it rather than just the one joke.

That was awesome! But at some parts it was difficult to listen to what you were saying.
Other then that... simply awesome!

My name is Rob and I am currently working on my own animated web series called Literally Hell. Its a comedy/horror series and its a passion project so please do check it out here on Newgrounds

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