The drawing style and the animation is pretty good. But you could improve on the story.
The drawing style and the animation is pretty good. But you could improve on the story.
The message in this story is clear and understandable but I think you need to improve on your animation skills. Just simply keep practicing and you'll get there.
THis video was old , im not that bad now at animating
Not bad. Quite intersting acturly.
That was pretty good but you could make it longer and add more jokes in it.
The animation, drawing style and audio are really cool. But maybe at the beginning you could add an introduction text to say what was going on with the story.
No offense but maybe you should find new ways to make fun of Jay-Z rather than using pokemon references. It's beginning to look like a cliche. But you've got the right idea of using Jay-Z and the drawing style is pretty good.
Not bad. But really short thou.
Not bad for your first attempt. But maybe add in some more jokes next time.
I'll try to.
Not bad. Not bad at all. I always struggle making flip books when I make them lol. But you seem to get the hang of it.
That was awesome lol. What's great about it is that it's relatable. Keep up good work.
Thank you so much. Thats exactly what I was going for!
My name is Rob and I am currently working on my own animated web series called Literally Hell. Its a comedy/horror series and its a passion project so please do check it out here on Newgrounds
Age 34, Male
UK
Joined on 2/3/14