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This is pretty good. It did put a smile on my face. :)

I enjoyed the dark humour of how they sacrificed the chicken which bled everywhere lol. And it was very creative too.

Keep up with the good work. :D

ClockworkPixel responds:

Thank you!

Not bad. I hope I get to see more of your work soon.
Keep up with the good work!

CartoonHunter responds:

Thanks!!!

You need to improve on your drawing skills if you want to get into animation. The audio is in very poor quality as well. If you want to use music then why not ask some guys here on newgrounds if you could use one of their songs. There are a ton of them here! But work on your art skills first.

EpicK13 responds:

Thx for the advice on the music.As for the drawing,I have my own style and u have yours,so chill dude.

Pretty much true. All the more reasons to make more animations, game and art stuff on Newgrounds!

KennyAfterlife responds:

Totally XD
I've always liked newgrownds more :D

Very nice. I like the way you'v used both 2D and 3D techniques to make this.

MysticSkillz responds:

Thanks

I don't fully understand the story. The main character dies in a hospital after getting hit on the head by another guy? Also personally I don't think alcohol is that bad for you. I mean yeah the character was under age which is a fair point. But saying that I think your message should be "don't drunk if you underage".

Also I've notice that you use the theme songs to mortal kombat and team america. These aren't really bad to use but they are pretty old songs. Why not try songs/music from a more modern generation?

Anyway just keep practicing animating and I'm sure you'll do fine.

12on3WithSprinkles responds:

It was for a school PE assignment, we had to make a video that demoted excessive/underage use of alcohol.

I used those songs for two reasons: Team America because it's an inside joke with my friends that I'm not going to bother explaining, and Mortal Kombat because it was meant to be ironic (and funny) that there was big pumping fighting music going, but the fight was between a mindless drunk and an idiot that only had to punch once.

Think you need to improve on your animating skills and you drawing skills. Those are the two key elements that you need to create a decent fight scene. You could improve on your story telling skills or creativity skills. But mainly animating and drawing needs improving.

SalehtheAnimator responds:

Thanks for the tips!

It's a bit short. As a suggestion you could have the carrot walking around the street after hear the bad news from his father to get the sense of whats happening to the carrot and how his life was turned upside down.

Anyway this isn't too bad. Really good choice of song. Keep up the good work.

morcov responds:

Thanks for the suggestion. I was sort of on the fence about the abruptness of the ending too.

I think you need to do a bit more with this. It was very short.

KBMstudios responds:

Yeah, it was just a quick joke I thought of one time. It's my first animation and I was really just trying to learn the ins and outs of flash. You're right though, it's definitely too short.

The animation was pretty cool but I think you need to add in some more jokes. It's not anything particularly too new if that makes sense.

SokkoTM responds:

Typically agreeable. Thanks for the feedback. :)

My name is Rob and I am currently working on my own animated web series called Literally Hell. Its a comedy/horror series and its a passion project so please do check it out here on Newgrounds

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