guitarrob's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potion Shop]

One of the greatest animation projects I've seen so far. Love the animation style and the character designs. Please keep up with the good work. Can't wait to see more of your work. :)

[Fallen Kingdom Intro]

Very nice. I like the way you'v used both 2D and 3D techniques to make this.

MysticSkillz responds:

Thanks

[Dokuroshima 1]

Not bad. I like the drawing style of your characters.

[Brain for Rent!]

Please make more lol. This one is a bit short though but aside from that it looks really good. And the jokes are really relateable and I appreciate that in an animation.

[No Alcohol]

I don't fully understand the story. The main character dies in a hospital after getting hit on the head by another guy? Also personally I don't think alcohol is that bad for you. I mean yeah the character was under age which is a fair point. But saying that I think your message should be "don't drunk if you underage".

Also I've notice that you use the theme songs to mortal kombat and team america. These aren't really bad to use but they are pretty old songs. Why not try songs/music from a more modern generation?

Anyway just keep practicing animating and I'm sure you'll do fine.

12on3WithSprinkles responds:

It was for a school PE assignment, we had to make a video that demoted excessive/underage use of alcohol.

I used those songs for two reasons: Team America because it's an inside joke with my friends that I'm not going to bother explaining, and Mortal Kombat because it was meant to be ironic (and funny) that there was big pumping fighting music going, but the fight was between a mindless drunk and an idiot that only had to punch once.

[PKMN Trainer Vs. Rainbow]

Think you need to improve on your animating skills and you drawing skills. Those are the two key elements that you need to create a decent fight scene. You could improve on your story telling skills or creativity skills. But mainly animating and drawing needs improving.

SalehtheAnimator responds:

Thanks for the tips!

[Fifa World´s Cup]

The drawing style is fairly decent. But I think you need to improve on your animating skills. Also you could add in more jokes in.

[Tortoise and the Hare]

Nice attempt. Your got good drawing and animating skills. Well done!

[Typical Anime Convention]

Not quite sure how that was a typical conversation since no one was talking at all. You do have decent drawing skills but you could add in more jokes into this.

[Vending Machine]

It's a decent attempt I guess. But honestly it's not really anything new and you could have more jokes added into this. And again your animations skills is... not bad but nothing too spectacular. But keep up the good work.