I think you should have added in more jokes and more animation as it is only 19 seconds long. But it's not that bad for a start. you've got the drawing style right aswell.
I think you should have added in more jokes and more animation as it is only 19 seconds long. But it's not that bad for a start. you've got the drawing style right aswell.
This is my first movie ever, thanks for being understanding.
Good piece of animation. But instead of explaining the problem with the "play" in the authors comments I think you should have mentioned that in the main menu. That way more people will be able to view your film (I struggled myself at first). Anyway keep up with the good work.
If I could go back and put a message in the preloader saying that the play button might mess up some times, I might as well just fix the problem. I guess I should fix it since some people are mentioning it.
My name is Rob and I am currently working on my own animated web series called Literally Hell. Its a comedy/horror series and its a passion project so please do check it out here on Newgrounds
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