Not bad. The art style is pretty good as well. The lip sync was slightly off though but other than that it's a pretty good attempt.
Not bad. I hope I get to see more of your work soon.
Keep up with the good work!
It's a good trailer. But the one thing that kind of bugs me is that you say in the description that this is a sci-fi, horror when it looks like a comedy to me. Unless this is suppose to be a comedy. But overall it does look good and I like the detailed art style.
I wish you the best of luck to this.
You need to improve on your drawing skills if you want to get into animation. The audio is in very poor quality as well. If you want to use music then why not ask some guys here on newgrounds if you could use one of their songs. There are a ton of them here! But work on your art skills first.
Thx for the advice on the music.As for the drawing,I have my own style and u have yours,so chill dude.
Pretty much true. All the more reasons to make more animations, game and art stuff on Newgrounds!
I've always liked newgrownds more :D
I can see that this is your very first animation so I am going to be fair, honest but also blunt. I think you need to work on your art style first before getting into animation. If you can't get the art right then your animation will fail. I'm sorry to say it but that's how it is.
Try practicing drawing characters and landscape a bit more. Drawing everyday will improve your art style. Even if you draw stuff just for 5 minutes per day.
I think this was a good attempt. The art and animation looked some what similar to what I use to make when I've first started. But there is defiantly room for improvement.
Whether you want to improve the animation or the story telling skills is up to you. Or maybe both if you feel like your up to the task.
If you want to improve your art skills then I suggest that you draw something everyday. Buy a small A5 sketch book and just draw characters, hands, trees, landscape and whatever. Just draw everyday and you will improve. Even if your just drawing something for 5 or 10 minutes.
That being said, keep up the good work!
Looks pretty cool. I give this 3 stars because it's simple a teaser for now.
The animation/art style really stands out. That's what I really like about this so far.
The voice acting is good. There's a good sense of direction for what you want the voices to be.
The humor is... meh. At the moment there isn't anything really funny about this. And since you've made this a comedy/parody I hope there are more developed jokes in the full version. I'm sure it does have potential though.
Overall, try and work on the humor a bit more. If you do this it will make this really stand out as an excellent piece of work. Keep up with the good work. :)
One of the greatest animation projects I've seen so far. Love the animation style and the character designs. Please keep up with the good work. Can't wait to see more of your work. :)
Very nice. I like the way you'v used both 2D and 3D techniques to make this.
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